16 SHOTS
Danielle Brazer 1 SHOT: Text: Danny Preslar: brother’s best friend, black hair, ice blue eyes, handsome, the first boy I was in love with. I remember purposely leaving my door open when him and my brother would hangout in the room next to mine so he could say hi if he passed by it. I remember wearing revealing clothes when he came over to see if he would look at me. Dan took my virginity that summer, he never knew how much I liked him. He broke my heart in two when he left for college and forgot all about me. I stayed sad for a long time. I loved him, I felt like I would do anything for him, that I could touch his skin and his only for eternity. I was sure that I would want him forever. I was 15 though. Music: low and upbeat Music in the background, narration over music Display: Zoom out of picture slowly SHOT 2-9: 8 VIDEOS OF MY PARENTS AND HOME LIFE: Text: My Mom and Dad met senior year of high school on the gym bleachers during homeroom where the school gathered in the mor...
Dear Danielle...I like that you're trying the Ken Burns style of moving across pictures, but keep practicing this...You can make it look more professional if you're making choices about what to highlight and focus in on. I like that you're interjecting the interviews, but the angle is a little weird...I'm wondering why I'm looking up at the two of you. Lastly, yes, use the text to ask questions, but you must also be reflective on your experience. Consider adding a little intro music so we can get into the video in a more fluid way.
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